The Fib
One
Small,
Precise,
Poetic,
Spiraling mixture:
Math plus poetry yields the Fib.
What’s that, you ask? That’s the very first Fib I wrote. What’s a Fib? Well, first a little backstory….
At the 2005 SCBWI-LA Writer’s Day, poet-novelist Ron Koertge mentioned the idea of “warming up” each day by writing haiku. To paraphrase what he said, writing haiku keeps you in tune with the importance of word choice and how you can say so much with so little… with the goal being that subconsciously you will continue to be aware of both points whenever and whatever you write.
I was intrigued, but my geeky mind immediately began to churn. Why just haiku? I wanted something that required more precision. That led me to a six line, 20 syllable poem with a syllable count by line of 1/1/2/3/5/8 – the classic Fibonacci sequence. In short, start with 0 and 1, add them together to get your next number, then keep adding the last two numbers together for your next one. It’s a wonderful sequence, and it’s one that is repeated in nature (most famously in nautilus shells). Heck, some folks use it in knitting and music,… and, as much as I’d like to say I invented a new form of poetry, these sequences have been part of various poetic structures since before Fibonacci’s time. However, "the Fib" is my take on the idea, complete with a wicked cool name, if I say so myself.
I’ve found writing Fibs helpful, as they really do make me conscious of word choice in everything I write (which is particularly critical in my poetry, picture book manuscripts, and e-mails to Mom). Also, I’ve found kids respond well to the form, especially when they hear that “Ewww. Worms.” can be 1/3 of their poem. So, I think it’s time for the Fib to gain more exposure.
In another post, I’ll talk more about various Fib rules and guidelines and subsets (like Fibs that tell fibs!), but for now, I’m curious to hear what you think or see if any of you want to try your hand at writing Fibs … and hoping you all want to join me in spreading Fibbery around the web/in classrooms/wherever.
This
Post
Is now
Completed,
So, I gotta book.
See you all on the comments page.
(There are wonderful Fibs in the comments here, and if you look to the right you'll find links to other posts with even more Fibbery (such as the post cleverly named More Fibbery.) If you head on up to the top of the blog you'll find new Fibbish links, too. In short, feel free to poke around... and don't be shy about telling a Fib or two.)
(And now another update: a book deal (and that's no fib!))
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You’ll answer
Pink Floyd’s great question:
Is there anybody out there?
Yup! Found you from your Fuse#8 comment....I don't blog so I can't link....but you are now on my "Favorite Blogs" to check each day. Need to get a coffee to sit and get to know you - your've written so much and I have arrived at the party a little late!
(not a blogger, but hopefully not a lurker....what else can I be?)
pink
rocks!
you are
my favorite wordsmith.
(Fibs, however, are not worthy)
What else can you be? Participant! (Hmmm, I coulda written this as a Fib, but I haven't had my coffee yet, either). Welcome to the blog and come back anon, anon.
And hello anonymous2 (electric boogaloo). You have a fantastic start to a Fib, and even though your syllables start to veer off the path of 112358ishness, I so love your sentiment that I don't mind. Thanks for the comment!
Hi
Cuz
Tres cool
This will be
Most fun to try with
Jess, the verbal wordsmith at home.
Must stop now and get some work done before kids wake up.
Amazing (to me) people saw your site in the first hours after posting (must be night owls).
see you at Passover, xoxo L.
Not enough coffee yet to try a fib, but must stop in to say "very cool"
Should
All
Comments
Be written
In the form of Fibs?
Enquiring minds would like to know.
Nah, all comments needn't be Fibbish. They can be, of course, as I'd love to see a body of Fibbery built up, but I'm interested in anything folks have to say about the Fib in concept, in practice, or in spreadability.
Wow!
I
Love this
Idea.
I always wanted
Permission to tell fibs in school.
GK......Have wasted at least an hour trying to compose an impressive FIBonesque masterpiece...with no luck.....sigh..
And duty now calls me elsewhere.....BUT I'll be back!
It's
tough..
Just two...
Even three..
But five?.. Eight?.. Enough!!
Thirteen I think I"ll try to do.
Would give me five more spaces to write down much more fluff!!
Impressed, GK ?? I won't tell you how much time that cost...gg..AND came out with rhyming scheme fatally flawed..... After I proudly wrapped it up, I noticed.......horrors.....I had failed to include the "three line."
My decision long ago not to risk my future on a career in writing ...writing anything....fully vindicated!
By the way, I am a frequent user of Fibonnacis in analyzing stock trends...a snap compared to what you're now introducing. And besides, made even simpler by using my trusty old calculator......
George,
make
my day
say you want
to retire away
from all those hacks on the beltway
deep in the brush in the hush of the discreet mesquites
to contemplate your legacy
nevermore to make
war on them
or us
or
rove
Whoa, Max. You've written actual POETRY there. Now, it's not a Fib as I'd defined it, but it's Fibonacci poetry (more specifically, in its stacked form. Tetractys is another short, stackable form, for those who care. When I start talking about my rules and guidelines... well, yours still will rock.
MC, that's also a fine effort! Mixing math in is a great idea. Probably a whole subset of Fibbery. Again, that line of 13 shows how hard it is to do a complete thought in 20 syllables... which I only point out cuz I really do use Fibs as I mentioned in my post. That said, I am LOVING that folks are writing here. MORE, I say!
Fib?
No,
No way-
Never I!
I would never lie.
Unless it was a little fib!
oooo word play
did i get it right?
I
hate
poets.
Really, I
want to kill them and
bathe in their warm blood and entrails.
[Just saw Slither last night....]
Word
Freaks
Like Fibs.
No surprise,
They've posted a few.
Any other Fib sightings yet?
Fibs Are Easy as Pi
Pi Day came;
i
took a deep breath
and
a circle i squared
then put a few remaining digits
aside
for my evening repast
(to be continued...)
Spike,
Blonde
Vampire.
Burned, smacked, chipped.
Nugatory much?
That's okay, we all still love you.
Funny and interesting... I used to write haiku's for my dog, until she became very irritated by them and would leave the room, scowling back at me on the way out....then I realized I was being sacrilegious because it was too many worship words in one sequence. All dogs are theologic literalists, I think.
Here is a Fib for a canine....
Walk
Park
Cookie
Wanna play?
Go fetch your frisbee
Gonna take a ride to the beach
Mad.
Excellent Fibbery here today. Jessie, you did get it right. Jim, I only play a poet on my blog, so go after that Max Entropy character, as THAT is a poet. And I love writing poetry for pets. Thanks to all who posted comments today. Let's see what tomorrow brings....
Disclosure
I'm
no
poet;
i only
play one on teevee
so write me a screenplay would you?
Spec
Script
For sale!
Who's buying?
Please, Mr. Speilberg...
Mr. Cameron.... Anyone?
wake
up
sunny
sweet relief
from bitter winter
dark days conduit renewal
As a former engineering major and math geek, but with a life-long interest in books and reading and poetry, I have to say that I do find fibs appealing.
In honor of the recent and unusual weather in Northern CA, here's my contribution:
Rain,
Rain,
More rain,
Slate gray skies,
Sullen and squall-filled.
All I ask is to see blue sky.
Not high art, but it did make me feel a little better.
Thanks also for the feedback on Frank Asch's books. Anything that makes a link for reluctant readers is good news to me!
Spring
back,
they said...
or forward ??
As I lie in bed,
I think best to wait a bit and listen for a bird!
GK..Sorry to subject you to this monstrosity.....Determined to make a "contribution"..!!??
Oh
Cool
How neat!
I have to
teach this to my kids
Who are not poets yet but like math!
Thanks for a great post! I found you through the carnival and I'll be back!
As promised, I have put up a post with some rules and guidelines and subsets. Though as I say there, the key thing is simply to WRITE. And to send me cookies, of course. Or any chocolate.
I
Fib
You Fib
We all Fib.
What I want to know
Is how do I get some ice cream?
Whole
notes
delay
full measure.
Procrastinating
hemidemisemiquaver!
In a mathematical vein:-
grad
div
vector
partial
Laplacian, maths
differential application
This
Fib
Has one
Mistake, that
It does not really
Have any mistakes at all!
Math,
Makes,
My head,
Quake with pain.
Writing a poem based
On Fibonacci, does the same.
__
Write My Essay
These
Poems:
Truly
Pedantic
Methodology.
Extremely restrictive process.
Not directly related to Fibonacci, however two years ago I wrote a poetry book entitled "Algoritmi" (is in Italian...), all related to computer science, from hard disks to Turing' theorem.
I've
never
been much
good at this,
but here's my feeble
attempt at writing a Fib. Hmm.
An excellent idea, and there are some really impressive Fibs here. Keep it up!
Pi.
Pie.
The same?
Different?
One is infinite,
The other is pastry covered.
Nice poetry format, but way too hard to write!
this
poem
maybe
better then
haiku for poems
in the english speach
because our language is so gross
I
dont
know
how
to
write
fibs
but
what the heck! :)
Dead
Man's
Millions
4-1-9
Desperate spammer
African dictator's wife
Blood,
Sweat,
And tears,
Made this Fib.
And for what purpose?
Just a fanciful waste of time,
Procrastination is a wonderful friend to me!
Is an '-ion' suffix considered 1 or 2 syllables? I'm assuming 1...if it is considered 2 then substitute 'wonderful' with 'special' or similar ;)
I
for
one welcome
our slashdot overlords
:)
new poetic form:
the spiral sequence unfolds
recombining genes.
this
is
far more
geeky than
another haiku.
Boy
Girl
Love sex
Make children
Need a better job
Shit
is
what you
make of it.
Try to avoid it.
If not, clean up the mess you make.
Who?
Who?
I ask.
Would write Fibs?
Not he, she, or we.
Just I can not stop trying to.
Hands, stop continuing to type in longer word strings!
one,
one,
two seeds,
three more in
the next, neat row,
together chasing the sun.
I taught a guy how to write a recursive function in C to calculate the Fib sequence just the other day...
Those
are
the best
twenty beats
I have ever seen
in the name of Fibonacci.
Short
One.
- yes
- no
- maybe
- that is all
- the only choices
- more than to be or not to be
- less than the multiple choice test we took yesterday
- binary versus trinary versus quadrinary is the current great debate
- where will you stand when the choice comes for you? with tested binary, new but simlar trinary, or with funky 4d quadrinary
One
One
Two more
And then three
At five syllables -
almost done. Eight for the finish
They
come
in great
masses now
You are slashdoted
Enjoy more fibs than expected
:)
Tool's James Maynard Keenan did this on Lateralus (the song) on Lateralus (the album) in 2001.
The sequence here is by the syllables in the words (not the words themselves).
The phrasing of how it is sung highlights the sequence.
The opening lyrics are:
black
then
white are
all I see
in my infancy
red and yellow then came to be
reaching out to me
let's me see
ooohh...
Sing
Me
A song,
A perfect
Rhythmic analogue
Of a Fibonacci sequence.
Life
Love
Have they
Fled from me?
And will they return?
And can I bear the solitude?
Is
My
Penis
Big Enough
Or Do I Need To
Consider Plastic Surgery?
So
Long
and Thanks
for all the
Fish, our dear Douglas.
Such shame, in the scheme of things,
forty-two is not in the Fibonacci sequence.
cold.
dark.
alone.
Excellent!
This nerdy form
can still be totally emo
How about another sequence...>>1/1/1/1/5/6
Naked
Staring
Stirring
Freak
How long can u evade me?
Empty
Hollow
Dark
Deep
When will u accept me?
Bursting
Emotions
Intense
Steep
Why will u not see me?
Trust
Mistrust
Mistress
Strip
How come u don't feel me?
Time
Seasons
Fashions
Faded
Does the cold wind bite thee?
These words are not mine but lyrics from Lateralus by Tool. The sylables are in "Fib" sequence.
1 Black
1 then
2 white are
3 all I see
5 in my infancy
8 red and yellow then came to be
5 reaching out to me
3 lets me see
The whole album is chock ful of this sequence.
These words are not mine but lyrics from Lateralus by Tool. The sylables are in "Fib" sequence.
1 Black
1 then
2 white are
3 all I see
5 in my infancy
8 red and yellow then came to be
5 reaching out to me
3 lets me see
The whole album is chock-ful of this sequence.
A
Fib
Newly
Attempted:
Mood siesta now
Fibonacci laughing aloud!
Poets would love this: a song that any professor
Would listen to and approve sure
And, the studious
Write now a…
Poem!
A
Fib!
Palindrome version. (It's early, best I could do...)
God,
all!
It's fib,
version A.
Edit idea...
No! Is rev B, if still a dog.
Fake Palindrome version just for grins...
I
See
Can o'
bi "F-words".
Back till EPS
spell it backwards - fibonacci
- Ed P. Smith (EPS)
Hey -- this is really cool. I'm an English teacher and plan to try this with my students -- how should I credit you?
This
form
forces
fine feelings
into abstruse lines
each longer longing to affix
a meaning to creations made live by febrile minds
and for this new spring trick I thank both you and SlashDot. Well done. Though if continued cumbersome.
Hare.
Hare.
They mate.
Now there's three.
Mate again, now five.
And again, now there's eight bunnies.
[Now thirteen bunnies, and counting. Mom will be pissed off.]
On the Scifaiku list we have been enjoying these for years on such subjects as alien coded transmissions.
Ok, here's my attempt...
A
Pen
It falls
And forms words
It bleeds, constant and continuous
A mark upon a perfect sheet of white
Tim
Rest.
Sleep.
Awake.
It's nap time.
I need to sleep in.
Is it Saturday morning yet?
the fibonacci sequence is also the foundation of how apparel is sized (called "grading"). The rules governing grading practices are based on the sequence.
We!
Are!
Your Friends!
You'll never
be alone again! Well come on!
Why?
Why?
Would You
Write a poem
Having syllables
Matching Fibonacci's Numbers?
I can only think that there is something wrong with you!
Peace,
Love,
Yogurt,
Granola:
The hippie credo.
It helps me recall the 60's.
un
jour
encore
et toujours
à passer ici
cet endroit m'ennuie et m'endort
je ne pense qu'à le fuir car le travail m'abrutit
...and its translation:
one
day
again
forever
I got to spend here
this place is boring and sleepy
Dreaming about getting out because work alienates
hi from France,
deep
Place
Seed
In soil.
Add water.
Wait for a few days.
Germination turns seed to sprout.
deep
love
delights
my senses
as the subtle light
that unveils your spiritual grace
If
you
can read
this then you
are close to my car
so if i break, i can sue
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Why?
How?
Easy.
Just start slow
Add a few more words
Then, sir, you have yourself a Fib
Can
I
write a
good poem
with this structuring
or is it too hard to construct
Fine,
great!
We bite
poetry -
eating syllables
Fibonaccis, so delicious!
With strong coffee,I have them
cause of this low-carb diet, minus
cinnamon rolls...
a few Fibonaccis never
hurt anyone and
on the side
So what,
no
rhyme?
How could I not after my drive in this morning:
My
Mid
Finger
Extended
To greet you this morn'
Just use your turning signal, Bitch!
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Hullo. Here via livejournal.
There
Is
Nothing
For those who
Refuse delusions
Of joy; but pain, spite unending.
I loved making it far more than I like making haikus. Thanks for the creation.
1/1/2/3/5/8
HALT!
HALT!
Oh no!
A riddle
that cannot be solved.
Burn in hell vile halting problem!
for
God
so loved
this sick world
that He sent His Son
who died, that we might become clean
and lives forever, that we might be saved from God's wrath
anyone wrote a program to write a fib ?
Poor
Fib.
A poet,
And didn't know it.
black,
blue,
yellow,
magenta,
these are the colors
that printers find are best combind.
This is very interesting - even for an architect. The Fibonnachi sequence is actually one of many types of formal grammer or 'linquistic architectures' also known as a Lindenmayer system. This idea could spark a myriad of new compositional aestetics.
and I said to myself... why not try... this should be close to the Fib Seq 1,1,2,3,5,8,13,21,34,55
-I
-Sit
-Here in
-My Office
-Trying not to work
-The difficulty of this task
-This task of appearing to be productive falsely
-Has proven to be much easier now that I have something else to indite about
-This Fibonacci sequence, this pattern of syllables, this mode of poetry delivery, this way of emoting my emotionality
-Is quite the interesting and enjoyable manner in which I can share our ideas and communicate them effectively to all the people of the world with internet connectivity and the usage of this web URL.
I
Write
A Fib.
Must I wash
Off my hands with soap?
Better than a spoken Fib, eh?
We go,
sometimes,
down to the park
to feed the ducks some bread
but when we run out of food they get mad
2/2/4/6/10
Its still a fib =]
-nexxuz
Beer.
Beer.
Beer Beer.
Break: Slashdot.
Beer beer beer beer beer.
Back to writing code for more beer.
Beer beer beer. Bed. Breakfast. Bug removal. (Boring.) Blog.
Just
My
Humble
Addition
To a strange new form.
More intruiging than other prose
But I think you should admit one more line for effect.
Is
This
New form
Some kind of
New English haiku
Or is it universal (math)?
In
Self
Ref'rence
I will spend
This space because it's
Math and math just loves itself so.
To
Make
A Fib:
Boil two
quarts water and add
some words. Is it al dente yet?
Her
heart
beating,
I felt truth
in the soft rhythm,
I toiled with grace and purity.
Immortality, it seams, takes refuge in numbers.
Ah!
Look!
How strange.
A graph grows
On the line edges
It looks vaguely exponential
(Of course I know it's not, how could it be? But still, Look!)
Baby Fib
(in honor of my sister who's first baby is due today)
now?
soon?
baby
anytime.
excited fam, friends
don't mean to bug you but...still do!
A fib 404 message in the public domain:
This
Page
Is not.
404
You'll find nothing here
You'd better just click "back"-- move on.
who's?
whose.
(yes, mine)
please ignore
my grammer error
in my previous post, dammit.
World
Linked
Bridging
Digital Divide
Creatively uses technol
Oh Gee! That last word didnt quite fit on its own line
one
hard,
rocking,
pulsing beat
brings me to my feet
leads me to what Ive forgotten
pristine in reccolection but now smells all rotten
I see the beach, i see the trees, i smell the sea and feel sand on my knees but i know
Deep down I know but do you? the world isnt round and the sky isnt blue, the schools are not safe and the air is not clean, the news isnt true
so what do we do… Let the old boys club dictate how its run, liberate a nation
hurt them for fun. desensitized to fear, blood and pain
But it doesnt look like they won
the world is not dumb
complacent
maybe
so
sad
-- quoted from brainpron.net
I
want
to be
all the things
my mother said I
couldn't be in my own life time.
you
I
would think
that I'd learn--
grammar with two A's!
hasty perfectionist...slow down.
Write
Line
By Line
Poetry
It’s Fibonacci
Mathematical Syllables
need
one
hour
to compose
an impressive fib
to rival all, with no luck, sigh...
thanx, mc, you had one there....
Hey
I
posted
a nice fib
where the hell is it?
oh
say
can you
see any
bedbugs on me? Dumb
songs seem to live longer than most
real poems. Why do I recall that but not true prose?
Saw
Fibs
On a
Site I love
Now I'm stuck fibbing
And I can't seem to stop at all.
I'm
not
really
qualified
to wrangle numbers
to or to comment on perfection
dust
clot
gathers.
my keyboard
is like a desert.
the oasis is the off switch.
Excellent idea! In response --
3 Consider
1 Pi:
4 That delightful
1 Thing --
5 The ratio of
9 Circumference to diameter
I have long appreciated the benefits of writing within rigorous boundaries.
http://99words.livejournal.com/
Wait...
No!
Haiku,
Senryu,
Are not congruent!
(Practice poetic pedantry!)
Fibs,
form?
content?
All should have
element from set
of all possible math concepts.
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For
Us
Strange, odd
People who
Like to play with words,
Fibs are a perfect time-waster!
This should keep my family busy for weeks - thanks!
CarynW