Monday, December 20, 2010

Thoughts During the Downpour - a rainy day poem

Thoughts During the Downpour
by
Gregory K.

I always wished the rain away
And said “come back some other day.”
It worked real well, but now I fear
“Some other day”?
It's here.

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4 comments:

Sue Welfringer said...

Love this!

Unknown said...

Great poem. I sometimes feel like that.

Jessica Stanford said...

Love it. I just think that you should tweak your last line to
"Some other day, at last, is here." Or, "Some other day, alas, is here". # 1 is my pick. Both of those lines have 8 syllables. Your version has 8, 8, 8, 6. I think it would be perfect with 8, 8, 8,8.
Great job!

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