Wonders
(after the traditional rhyme “I Saw a Peacock with a Fiery Tail”)
by
Susan Marie Swanson
I saw a tiger
burning bright
I saw the sun
in the middle of the night
I saw a star
torn from a tree
I saw a leaf
holding a key
I saw a pocket
full of art
I saw a book
shaped like a heart
I saw a stone
coming untied
I saw a shoelace
wiggle and hide
I saw some tadpoles
buzzing round a cake
I saw a bumblebee
high above the lake
I saw a cloud
pacing at the zoo
You can see
these wonders too!
© 2010 Susan Marie Swanson. All rights reserved.
Susan Marie Swanson writes poetry and picture books that pick perfect details and have juuuuust the right words to tell their stories. For a reader, they're a treat, and for a writer, they're a master class if you study them. Perhaps this comes from spending 25 years writing poetry WITH kids not just for them or perhaps it's natural talent (or both!) - check out this interview or her site to see if you can decide - but whatever it is, it is an inherently good thing.
Susan's The House in the Night (2008) received the Caldecott Medal for illustrator Beth Krommes (the second such poet-to-Caldecott mentioned here this week - editors/illustrators take note!) and a slew of other awards and stars and the like. No wonder - it's gorgeous and an amazing read-aloud. You really should share it with children (and parents and grandparents) today so you can understand why I'm such a fan and so happy to have Susan Marie Swanson here as part of 30 Poets/30 Days.
Yesterday gave us Cancion De Mango/Mango Song by Jorge Argueta. Tomorrow, Weeds by Ralph Fletcher! For more on 30 Poets/30 Days and ways to follow along, please click here.
Wednesday, April 07, 2010
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I think I'd like to see a stone coming untied. Now I want to know if it unties to base minerals, or what...
I love poetry which just feeds my crazy imagination.
What a wonderful poem! It has given me poem envy.
This poem is a real imagination-opener! Greg, thanks for another 30 Poets! I'm enjoying it so much, I'm featuring a link on my own blog post today http://readlearnandbehappy.blogspot.com/2010/04/poetry-tag-and-other-sites-national.html
Hey Greg, My middle school students are looking forward to new poem each day! Talk about motivation! Thanks!
Love this poem! I am with Tanita - a stone untied? That's my favorite line. I am going to have to look for more of her.
Lovely. Thank you both.
Especially after last night's #kidlitchat on twitter, the idea of poems and picture book text being related seems so clear to me with Susan's "Wonders." I can imagine an illustrator being SO excited to make this poem a picture book. It was lovely to read. Thanks to you both,
Namaste,
Lee
Love the imagery of this poem - I could see it all and found myself grabbing a pen to doodle once I finished reading it.
What a joy to read. I absolutely love it! Thank you.
This is wonder-ful indeed!
i really like this poem. i love poems a lot and so does my teacher ms.nisman.i wrote a poem.
when i walk through the woods i herd a wired noise i wonder what it was but i cant figer it...
im in the same class as the other kid on ms.mismans class any way i really like this poem!!!!see you on monday anonymous
oh no i wrote the wrong thing its ms.nisman sorry
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