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Sunday, April 02, 2006

Spreading Fibs

Spread
Fibs!
Write 'em.
E-mail 'em.
Post them on the Web.
Every life needs more poetry.

7 comments:

  1. I
    Went
    Camping
    This weekend
    And came home to find
    Greg asking us all to tell fibs

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  2. Bugs.
    Rain.
    Critters.
    Rocky ground.
    No indoor plumbing.
    Motel 6 looks better to me.

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  3. Anonymous1:30 PM

    Dirt?
    Tents?
    Just too
    Primitive.
    For me, it's "camping"
    When room service stops at midnight.

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  4. Anonymous5:33 PM

    Damn
    Greg!
    I see
    my future
    procrastinations:
    mis'rable counting syllables

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  5. Anonymous6:27 PM

    Call It Camp
    in
    my
    motel
    room stinking
    of cigars and booze
    stoking a circular campfire
    my idiot poems smolder in Dante's wastebasket

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  6. Anonymous7:20 PM

    It was the late radio raconteur Jean Shepard who introduced me to Haiku. Now that my younger relative has exposed me to a kindred form of his invention, I find myself hacking poems for the first time in decades. Thank you Greg; it feels good.

    For the record, here is my first -- and probably best -- attempt as a teen at haiku (Shep always talked about starlings as disreputable conspiratorial birds who skulked in the bushes babbling all night):

    hush, noisy starlings
    it is late, and your stories
    do not amuse me


    Fibs are open-ended, unlike haiku. This makes me think that the form would appeal more to Americans than Haikus (still, there's this body of work. On the other hand, fibs still might end up being the fad-of-the-month.

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  7. I'm related to you, Max? EXCELLENT! Since I'm in Hollywood, I'm 29, so you must be 30. Love that collection of Haiku, too. We can't let that go unanswered:

    Spam.
    Damn!
    Pig ears,
    Salt plus salt,
    And glistening gel:
    Nine thousand points on Weight Watchers.

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