tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-22755318.post7206450955287698756..comments2024-03-28T01:47:40.319-07:00Comments on GottaBook: 30 Poets/Day 21 - Greg Pincus and Tracie Vaughn ZimmerGreg Pincushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00449684160718426340noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-22755318.post-60998686799869228452014-04-21T03:59:03.301-07:002014-04-21T03:59:03.301-07:00Wow--two totally different kinds of poems, and bot...Wow--two totally different kinds of poems, and both wonderful! I love the extended metaphor and silliness (but complete logic) of yours, Greg, and Tracy's is just lovely (the whole book is fabulous--the haiku are my favorite!), especially:<br /><br />elephants swooped in with <br /> the first ribbons of dawn <br /><br />Swoon.<br /><br />Thanks for a lovely beginning to my Monday!<br />laurasalashttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13807781795919555208noreply@blogger.com